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Commented on: Thu Dec 28, 2006 @ 11:45am


	even create fake love to have it hiya kyon!!!!! blaugh

Commented on: Thu Dec 28, 2006 @ 06:14pm

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Commented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 11:29pm


	Lol...most of it is very true. All writing is like a way to the poet's mind. Can I guess you're one to do anything for love..?

Commented on: Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 02:44am


	This poem is pretty good I can see what you're going to but I think you need to work on the flow the second line seems a bit long it makes the poem come out somewhat uneven in my opinon.

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Commented on: Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 03:16am


	I agree with DR4G0NG1RL. I'm not into poetry much but it does loose it's flow.

Commented on: Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 06:22am


	I changed it a bit since it didn't sound to flow. I still think it doesn't flow that much either, but feel free to add comments so I can make it sound better.

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Commented on: Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 11:31pm


	wow eek purrrrrty good 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 06:34am

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Commented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 02:10pm


	yes those are quite true your beautiful and gentle im ugly and i used to be hateful it keeps people to gether like duct tape (sorta) i cant say much on that one we are kinda blind i think yay i can start over and im trying my best and i hope you are too

Commented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 03:42pm


	~blushes~ Thanks No your not the duck tape part is true I guess We are both trying our best.

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