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Just type what I feel
You made a mistake but down we all
Still promise me you will stand tall
Keep it together until your set free
Please, promise me.

Just think of me
Ill think of you
I wont know what your going through
I wont be there to talk to you

So stay safe and keep sane
Just try to ignore the pain
Ill miss you but stay standing in the dark rain.
Promise me.

Goodbye for now my good old friend
I hope to speak to you again.






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The Spellslinger
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 08, 2010 @ 08:49pm
It's OK, but the first two lines didn't make much sense or fit in well. sweatdrop
And the rhyme scheme kind of went: aa bb bccc ccc d ee.
It should be: aa bb cc dd or ababcdcd
It could be great with some editing though =D


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