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My STORY!! (not named) this is a story I'v been writing and I want to know what people think of it!!!


confuzzled_grl
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Chapter 1:


A beautiful day in the month of February. It was Valentines Day, and the sun was just setting. You could go to the beach and watch the sunset and all its beauty. And in New York that doesn’t happen often. So everyone was enjoying the nice cool day by giving gifts and sharing love. Everyone, but the 14 year old girl named Sarina...she was to busy trying to stay alive!

Sarina didn’t know what happened, one minute she was walking home from school and the next she was in the back of a car. And now she was running away from the monsters who kidnaped her in the first place! She also didn’t understand why they are running after her. She have no idea what they look like,(since they put her on drugs that hazed her vision) and Sarina wasn’t rich so they couldn’t get a ransom from her either...but...she stayed with them with them longer then she thought she would have been...and she felt as if her body was almost ripped to pieces. But now Sarina didn’t care about her body, which was screaming in agony at her, she just wanted to live!
“Girl where are you little..”the leader of the group (or Clint) yelled at Sarina. she was so busy running that she couldn’t think of anything to do. She could have yelled for help, but just ran in silence, in fear if she had yelled, she would have died from the strain on her body. So she just kept running away, turning, never stopping in fear of her life.
Also at the time, no one was around, because they were at the beach watching the sunset and waiting for the Valentines Day fire works. And that means Sarina was alone...alone, running from those inhuman...things!
After about an hour of running Sarina’s body was giving way, she started coughing blood, and felt as if every bone in her body was broken, which for all she knew they were. But she couldn’t scream out the pain in fear they might hear her. By now she didn’t know if they were behind her, too busy running she never turned to look if they were behind her, and she didn’t hear them yelling either, she wanted to stop, but the adrenalin rushing through her wouldn’t let her.
It was also becoming dark, so she began to look for a dark place to hide. Sarina eventually found a dead end ally way with a pile of trash bags, so she dug herself a nice place to hide as fast as she could, and covered herself in bags. Even though it stunk and stuff was sticking to the blood on her legs, she didn’t care, as long as she was safe. She didn’t want to fall asleep in fear they would find her, but as soon as her body got to relax, without warning, her body couldn’t hold out any longer and she passed out. she didn’t dream..it was just...quite, fearful, nothingness...


(sooo...What do ya think!! PLZ COMMENT!!!!!) if you have seggestions for main characters name tell me...i dont like "Sarina" a whole bunch!!




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