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Chaw baybeh
Love of life... love of dreams... love of light...love of hope and of all things pure... and thus I say no more for my heart has broken into a million pieces...torn apart by the threads of time and the countless people who I have seen waste away their life as though it is nothing... The way they look at you and their eyes hold a hollow gaze… it is as though you can see into their soul… into the very heart of their pain yet you can do nothing to take it away… nothing to end their suffering… They are the ones that even standing next to them you feel an ominous presence… not even knowing that it is them… the ones that you cannot help but to feel the desire to tear yourself apart in their presence… The ones that are true tell that nothing is wrong… they hide their problem in hopes to not bring you down with them in their hatred for themselves… the one that are fake tell the world and brag about how “depressed” they are and how they “hate everything” and how much they have hurt themselves… when really all they want is to bring others into a vortex of lies that make you feel sorry for them… they care about nothing more than themselves… and to make themselves happy… no matter what the cost is to others… they say that they wish to take their life away... but when it comes down to it… they cherish their life… even though it is only on selfish ambition… There is unwanted hope for them… but for the ones who are truly fallen… truly torn apart… truly broken… there may be no hope in ending their pain except to wait out until their last breath on this earth has been drawn… and they join the Holy Father above... but… there also may still be hope… for the fallen can rise again… the torn can be pieced together… and the broken can be fixed if fate decides it is so… Fate is a cruel thing… but sometimes it brings mercy to those who are in its favor… The fallen may fly again… the torn can be whole again… the broken can be a work of priceless art






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nightqueen1993
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 11:25pm
I heart you Kristin. Thats really all I can say except I love your writing you just have to keep reading until its over and when its over you just want to read more **gasping for air** and when you get more its like heroine you just cant stop you need it to survive thats how your writing is.
This is really good and I have to tell you that it is so true.
One of the most awesomestestestest entries blaugh heart

Love ya


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 02:26pm
its just a great poem kris you out did yourself again!stop please because im suposed to be the naturaly gifted writer/preformer.



4ever_in_neverland
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[[Fallen_Angel]]
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 06:01pm
lol aww i love you both!!! ^^ thankez!


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 17, 2007 @ 02:39am
you just love making me feel bad on these things don't you.... lol.... um yeah.... call me sometime soon if you can.... i think we need to talk



Silently_Dying
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