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Kyon' s personal poem
I will write mostly poems in here. Please don't steal the poems that I have written and put my heart into.
Invisible
I felt invisble because you didn't notice me.
There was a wall seperating us.
Even if you did notice me,
you weren't interseted in me.
I was worthless to you.
I was like trash to you.
You loved her more than me.
I couldn't change things no matter what.
All I can do was wish that you would love me.






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Xythes
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 02, 2007 @ 11:23pm
Hm, do you mind suggestins? I know again it's only about the message again, but English is my favorite subject and all.
Line 2: ...was [something] like a wall...
Only that. Sorry >.<


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 06:32am
I don't mind suggestions.
I never knew English was your favorite subject.
Thanks for telling me.
I edited it.



kyonichi4
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breakface2
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 02:17am
well i wish we could have met sooner
i would have definately noticed you
and would have been very interested in you
not lieing ill fall for anyone with an accent as ive already told
any many other things to


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 02:35am
~blushes~
Thanks



kyonichi4
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