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II December Rain II
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Drowning
It wasn't entirely intentional,
Not altogether accidental.
I don't know quite where my motives lay
I'm not sure quite what I felt,
As I lingered, languidly,
And watched,
Its futile limbs contorting, flailing,
Almost exaggerated,
Almost unnecessary
I watched as it struggled desperately
To cling to all it knew
All it could ever know

I watched passively, pensively
As, on the artificial, unforgiving surface
Dreary and barren under the
Harsh fluorescent lights
Its grip faltered and failed
And though I knew very well
The inevitability of circumstance
I contemplated pleading indirectness
As crystal clarity rose up and engulfed it
The slightest of gestures,
Would have set it free
And yet, because I wondered at it
I watched it wash away;
Life.

Maybe it didn't make a difference,
I might not have changed my world.
But, as I am distant,
Who am I drowning?






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Luv_the_Black_Parade
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 @ 12:56am


this is so cool! it reminds me of something i did to someone i really love....or like because technically I can't love him. Anyway, I loved it, even though I may have misinterpreted it. biggrin


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