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it was a dark day for us as we headed to battle a force we could not defet.as i went to the front i said theas words to the men.*thear will be many men to die hear on this dark day but as for the people we love they will live on and so shal we we live in thear hearts and we shal live forever as long as we are rembred and our story shal be told for the rest of days as the earth lives we live as long as the earth ceaps moving so shal we.and with those words said the small army was redy to die for thear family they drew thear swords and thear ax's and they redyed thear heilds.the dark army came closer and as the army came so did more army's from acrose the land they heald thear swords and ax's and they wear ready to die just a the others wear.the battle way long and full of blood shead many men died but the small army wa the victor.