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Aliana's Story
This story which appears below is a story i wrote about my little chibi below and how it all began...


Aliana an 11 year old orphane was laying in her bed looking up at the bed above her when the door burst open and in came Mr. Hardaway the head of the orphanage, Aliana sighed and went to the edge of the bunk and waited for Mr. Hardaway to walk past her. Aliana is the youngest and only girl of about 4 boys in the home, she is very scrawny so she is always picked on; once a boy named Racer came over one night to her bunk and gagged her and touched her for a while while all the other boys just stood around and watched and ever since that night Aliana has always wanted to get out of the orphanage...


One morning while she was making her bed Racer came up behind her lifted up her sun dress and squeezed her buns and played with her small breasts for a while; and all Aliana did was just stand there holding the pendant around her neck and kept her eyes closed until she heard a noise outside and the door burst open and Racer quickly stopped and went over to his bunk and watched as the stranger in a brown aviators coat, a cane, brown pants, brown boots and emo glasses came limping in. (When Mr. Hardaway or strangers came in the children have to come to the edge of their bunks and stand up strait and tall and have their heads held high.) This time however Aliana had her head down and when the stranger came limping past her she noticed that his right foot was shorter than his left foot (about 2 inches difference); when she looked up at him she saw him smiling down at her with a simple but yet straight smile at her; Aliana quickly looked back down to her toes and the stranger continued on towards Mr. Hardaways office. When the door shut behind him Aliana took a sigh of relief and went back to finishing her bed before she was so rudely interrupted by that pervert Racer.
After Aliana was done with her bed she looked over at Mr. Hardaway's office and thought that it was weird that the stranger hadn't been out yet; a little while later the stranger was standing in the door way bowing to Mr. Hardaway and walking right towards Aliana; she quickly fixed her long brown hair, fixed her sundress and wiped her face clean of dirt, when she was finished the stranger is standing in front of her with his hand out stretched towards her "My name is Sir Justice B. Caring and i have just adopted you Miss. Aliana but you may call me Justice and i have just adopted you" Aliana looks around at the boys and Racer they look mad so when Justice starts walking towards the door she follows him but right when she's about to leave the orphanage forever she quickly runs over to Racer and knees him in the groin. Racer falls to the ground in a heap of yelps and cry's of pain holding his groin area as Aliana walks back to the door and takes Justice's hand and walks out into the bright sun as she leaves the orphanage forever...


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  • User Comments: [2]
    i luv it, but u could always add a little bit more details.

    comment XxShirayuki-MizorexX · Community Member · Sat Aug 15, 2009 @ 03:21am
    i luv it! the ending is funning. lol

    comment XxShirayuki-MizorexX · Community Member · Wed Aug 19, 2009 @ 02:29am
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