Happy Birthday
copyright 2009 Elyse M. Clark
As the girl sits in her house
the killer waits for his strike
Its her birthday and shes all alone
the killer stops to talk on his phone
as she goes to turn on the tv
the killer slides in the house
He sees the birthday decorations, but moves on
she changes the channel and wonders why her parents left
He pulls out a gun and hides behind the couch
she turns abound as if she hears something
He jumps out with the gun to her head
as she yells, "Please don't shoot me its my birthday!"
he says with a twisted smile, "Happy Birthday...." and pulls the trigger
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As the girl sits in her house. A killer wait's for his strike, bidding his time for the perfect moment.
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"Please don't shoot me, it's my birthday!," she yells trembling in fear.
With a twisted smile, "Happy Birthday..."
He pulled the trigger.
(iono xD it's still pretty good and my example sucked)