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Rachael's Journal
Poems and Random Thoughts
Why?!
Why have you have left me?
Why have you done this to yourself
Why have you left me
I needed you and you left me
You took the easy road
You left me here all alone to face this cruel world
We were in it together damn it
Damn you
You left me
I don’t care that I’m being selfish
I don’t care that I sound like a brat
I want my friend back
I want my love back
I don’t want to face this alone…..
But you leave me no choice
There’s no turning back from what you’ve done
I can’t do that
I can’t leave the ones that need me
So rest in peace knowing that I’m striving
That I’m facing this head on without you
That I need your help but will have to cope

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  • User Comments: [1]
    Spyceh
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    Wed Jul 08, 2009 @ 03:25am


    Last couple lines are a bit cluttered.
    Also,

    "We were in it together damn it
    Damn you"

    Maybe the damn it should be a separate phrase. Either a new setence or a new line. I think that would help the flow


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