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It's a book thing.
My title says it all.
Working on it
Another "song" I'm working on. Unlike the others, I'll be posting the verses as they came to me and I'll change them as I see fit. Feel free to critique though and offer suggestions. It doesn't have a name so first person to think of one gets.....let's go with a 1000 gold. Don't just come up with some crappy name though for the gold, it'd be beyond annoying and a waste of not only my time but yours as well. Here's what I have so far.

So down on yourself.
Self-esteem shattered by those around you.
You cry and plead,
Think so harshly about life.
It's time to deliver a message
It's one you can't deny
Either grow up and live through life
Or prepare to ******** die






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x__thatxonexemoxkidd
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commentCommented on: Thu May 15, 2008 @ 03:00pm
Broken soul?
Grow up or die? =D lol.
Yeah Idk o-o I'm not good with this stuff.
&& if you do like those two xDD don't give me the gold. it's okay.


commentCommented on: Thu May 15, 2008 @ 08:03pm
"Broken Soul" might work.



SpheresofMadness7767
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KAIS3R_9
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commentCommented on: Sat May 17, 2008 @ 07:13pm
you need to write more and establish a running theme b4 i can suggest a fitting name


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