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A Fallen Soul's Redemption..
Here,....sitting....on the ground,....looking up at whoever is standing.......They all have their own souls,...their own hearts,...their own lives...The essence of which came from their own spark......Their own air they inhale brought by the element,
Fading Away..........................


As days go by.........and as nights grow darker...........it gets cold......to cold to even breathe!.......almost as if i were being pierced by one thousand knives all over my body from freezing thin air.............I must hurry!...........hurry and find him......for i can already see through my bare hand....throguh my bare body.........through my bare self..........I fade as time goes by............"If only there were a way to stop it" i say........but no one can undo what they have already done................. I must search harder!.......make no mistakes this time!...........I must find him!.........before time runs out!.........................







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colorWIRED
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 10:19pm
The wind accepeted the orders from the enslaved sky.......she wondered why the sky didn't just never let the sun awaken again.....but....quickly the wind
found the shadow.....it was begenning to grow cold in the places that he searched.....the sky's orders......she must help him.....however that may be.....
the wind enveloped him in warmth......but he remained cold twards her......insisting that he needed no help.....that he needed no care....needed no love....
...nothing.

again just a response! smile i must say that yours was great and this one that i wrote is kinda crappy this time! oh well keep on writing luv! smile


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