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This is my little place to write and chat. Comment if you want. I useally talk about whats on my mind, rate something or just talk about a topic thats been going on today
And it begins Part 3
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..,MEMORY RECOVER...10%
...VIDO LOG RECOVERED...PLAYING..

Kairu feels himself floating in something. He opens his eyes and can’t see very well. He looks out in a world clouded by lime green liquid. He can see figures moving about.
"Who are they?" he wonders. He squirms a little, making bubbles move about. Some of the figures stop. Muffled noises go thought the liquid. They confused Kairu. The liquid is warm, but Kairu doesn't want to be here. Something scares him about it
Some of the figures got closer. He wanted to get away.His tail trashing about. Then, watm soft hands hold him. He was wrapped up in a warm thing. and a person smiled down at him. Thought he was still not uses to having the machinery in him, he could say one thing, "Mama..."

Kairu begins to stir and wake up






User Comments: [1]
danna the devil
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Thu Oct 11, 2007 @ 01:20am


Oooh sounds interesting so far :] I like the cliff hangers you use in each chapter, I think it adds a good effect on the suspense in the story. Good so far ^_^


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