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They sheen grow dull in autumn light,
They feathers rough from evening flight.
And they path grows dimmer still,
I run thy plains with holy might.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
Thy muscles scream with no relent,
To stop and rest, the evening spent.
Thy refuse to stop the chase,
For those I love are still as stake.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
They trail runs cold it well may seem
Through rivers, valleys, plains, and streams.
I spread my wings with pure desire,
To keep it from thy dam and sire.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
They blood runs hot with fear and hate,
To put and end to thy own fate.
Down I plundge with my war cry,
And I am left to starve and die.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
Thy crippled bones with flesh and blood,
Life useless in the stinking mud.
Though soul released from thy own fate,
Thy would was crippled with my hate.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
Disease took over thy as foal,
For it stole away my very soul.
Thy released from it's cold grasp,
Wander till the very last.
"Whi-Ah!"
"Whi-Ah!"
They war cry heard forever more,
Remind of what it had in store.
The pain and fear it did create,
Fell into thy own fate.
- Title: Deadly Innocence
- Artist: Aribis
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Description:
Yes well, this is another story poem. The chorus sounds silly, I know. But I feel like it adds something to it. Comment!
comments > votes - Date: 03/26/2010
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Aribis - 04/03/2010
- I sort of explained it in my description. It is supposed to help impose unity throughout the piece and help it flow
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- GlitteryKitties - 04/02/2010
- Nice.. but what's with the "Whi-Ah!"? It doesn't make sense to me.. The rest was good so 4/5
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- BAMBEE_MEMORIES96 - 03/26/2010
- it's good! (^_^)
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