Distress

• Artist: Moonlight_Artemis 13
• Description: This is pretty much about how I feel in real life and how alone I feel. Just a note, I've NEVER tried to commit suicide like at the end of the poem.
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: distress

A tear rolls down my cheek
My breaths come shallow and quick
My suffering and hurt is finally exposed
The damaged past we can never fix

Can I ever see beyond the pain?
My life is spinning out of control
A stranger lies deep within your eyes, but
Can you undo what you've done to my soul?

Pain spread throughout our lives like a stain
Though the despair I feel is slowly becoming faint
Hate's power strangles our love and joy
I can't believe it's come to pass this twist of fate

You scream and yell at me
And I only cry in return
I want this dispute to cease
For your forgiveness, that's what I yearn

I feel abandoned, always rejected
I want this tormented life to end
I reveal a gun, aiming it at my chest
When I pull the trigger, will my shattered heart mend?

Comments

[x__iiAznGee]

awh.. this is an amazing poem.. smile its super bettuh than mine.. ^^
this is by most my favorite poem. <33

[Moonlight_Artemis 13]

Aww..... You guys are so supportive! *sniffle*

[girlfab24]

this is very good poetry i'm so touchedin your words i can feel your pain in my heart... but if you want to talk with me just add me up we can be goood friends i'll mke you smile smile

[Erika Natsuki]

oh my goodness i can feel your pain so much...*tear* if u wanna talk ill be here?

[punkergirl1395]

amazing poem
i can feel the pain in the words so clearly
and i know how you feel
i know im probably just some scary random stranger, but i can be here for you to talk to if you need it
<3
and great poem 5 stars