Hotel Rooms

• Artist: rosemidnight17
• Description: I was on my way back from North Carolina. We drove there and back due to my mother's fear of planes. We had to stay in a hotel/motel room and well, I ended up writing this around 3:30 in the morning. It was inspired with my irritation of why I don't like them. Hope you enjoy and please comment.
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: hotelmotelhatequstion

Hotel rooms. God, how we HATE hotel rooms.
We are not a simple creature. We have our reasons to DESPISE hotel rooms.
People believe WE are the EVIL ones, but if only
If only they could understand
Our DISGUST of hotel rooms.
These so called homes away from homes are FARTHER from a home then the Deep caves of your mind where we reside.
They IMPREGNATE themselves with the memories of others.
We wonder how you cannot feel it sufficating you???
The man's guilt of the whore lying in the bed while his wife is yet again home Alone.
How can you sleep in those BEDS, we wonder.
Do you know how many young girls were taken advantage of here?
Does it not bother you
That the night before those disgusting things that you lay
Your body down to rest upon
Was molding itself to another man or woman's body?
All of those recollection of thoughts
Good and bad.
Do you not feel it PRESSING against you?
Don't you feel it as you walk into the room?
Oh hotel rooms. How we HATE hotel rooms.

Comments

[HUMIDIFIER]

i like hotel rooms...anyway. it has some kind of interesting thought but it sounds like a seinfeld routine at the beginning more than outrage. also, some line came off as unbased attacks against my gender and since i'm reviewing this, that don't fly homie. the capitalization adds nothing; a well written poem will emphasize itself.

[ekitten614]

I like how you capitalize some words, it's a nice effect! That's a really cool poem, though I personally love hotel rooms anyway. Great job!

[thedidkid95]

i luv this i hate hotel rooms myself the thought of other people that have been in the room and done it on that bed were u sleep i give u 5stars