- by Kaylin Winters |
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- | Submitted on 12/30/2009 |
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- Title: Vendi Un'Vezson
- Artist: Kaylin Winters
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Description:
Vendi Un'Vezson is the eldest female out of 3 children whom survived the destruction of the drow house. Vendi is cruel and evil woman who will do anything for the survival of her bloodline. She is a swordmage I play in my DnD game. She also has a man servant who follows her around but haven't drawn him yet.
I am working on my proportions a bit more. I like to thank those who given me constructive criticism. please keep the comments coming. - Date: 12/30/2009
- Tags: vendi unvezson drow
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Comments (6 Comments)
- IMMABEAST2940 - 06/03/2010
- hi
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- Captain Critique - 12/30/2009
- I would like to also give you some critizism, but since the person below me covered pretty much everything that I can see, all I can say is that in preportion to the head, the hair is way off.
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- _Jagaeg_ - 12/30/2009
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...Forgotten Realms..?
Anyways..its nice. - Report As Spam
- Kafeole11 - 12/30/2009
- continued: I like your style. I cant wait to see it get better!
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- Kafeole11 - 12/30/2009
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impressive!
Some constructive critisizm would be..
there is no arch in her back... but her front is well arched.
Her chest is a bit to round. and her ribs are far too large.
THe eyes are great, but they shouldn't curve with the outline of her face.
Her ear is too far away from her eyes
and her head-to-torso ratio is off. Her shoulders should go down or her head should get smaller (not that I'm one to critisize. I draw laying down and I mess up like that big time.)
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- yoliaberry - 12/30/2009
- I like it biggrin Her eyes are a bit off to me.. or is it the nose...? :/ Yes definitely the nose biggrin I would put it a little more to the left. Idk if the hand is supposed to look like a robot's hand but..yeah. If not, you should put it down more relaxed... oh idk. I'm bad at giving advises :SS Overall i like the pic=DD
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