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- | Submitted on 01/15/2010 |
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- Title: Crawling
- Artist: Angel From My Nightmare27
- Description: just a girl i made up, no name yet, any suggestions tell me what you think
- Date: 01/15/2010
- Tags: crawling
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- EL Carl and Lester - 07/14/2017
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- Overcooked-Pasta - 09/29/2012
- But don't feel depress or anger I'm only telling this to you because I want you to improve, this are just little details that you don't usually notice in-teal later on. If my critics sounded mean, then I'm sorry. D.:
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- Overcooked-Pasta - 09/29/2012
- If your going to make shinny marks then it should be straight across, and the curve shouldn't be as choppy. the bridge of her nose should be curve in, and her forehead should be the same size as her mouth and chin. Last thing her tail doesn't look like its in the center of her butt, or connected at all actually. Its also way to long it wouldn't end at her feet, if it does then you should see the tail near he bottom legs part.
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- Overcooked-Pasta - 09/29/2012
- The torso is to small it should be as big as her top thighs, or a little longer. If it was a dude then it would be more except-able since they usually have smaller torso then girls. The breast should move down some, it shouldn't be that closes to her neck, give it about 2-3 inches away from the end of her neck. The elbows should be at half the arm length size, the hands could be just a little bit bigger not much though. The hair look to raggedy and choppy.
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- Angel From My Nightmare27 - 02/12/2011
- whats so funny link44451 :]
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- link44451 - 02/12/2011
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lol
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- Angel From My Nightmare27 - 01/17/2011
- lol i like that, lol
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