Chapter 1 Case #183A The Burmese Falcon
In the 1930s in a dark alley in New York, a gangster named Johnny who was a mean and dangerous was harassing a nice hard working detective named Dan. Dan wouldn’t tell anyone about his cases. Johnny harassed him about a Burmese Falcon which was a bronze statue.
Every gangster was after this mysterious falcon. But Dan wouldn’t tell him anything, so Johnny shot him. Five years later….two people came out of no where. They were agents Brody and Lana. Now Brody was a handsome fellow, he was very nice to the ladies and Lana was a young and attractive lady and was so well built that all the men just couldn’t keep their paws off of her.
The reason why they were there was to help Eddie figure out who killed his brother Dan. Eddie was exactly like his brother. He wouldn’t tell about his cases. But Johnny and his fellow gangsters thought that they were after the falcon. So, they started to shoot at them, the two ran off into a clothing store. Johnny and his followers ran after. While the gangsters were looking, the two dressed in regular clothes, so they would fit in with the crowd.
Brody and Lana heard them coming so they went out the back window. They ran to Eddie’s office and told him that they were there to help find his brother’s killer. Just as they were talking to Eddie, he got a phone call from Johnny. He said that the two where after the falcon.
So Eddie got off the phone and drove them to an intersection and that’s when the breaks went out. The two new they were double crossed. So the gangsters took them to their secret hide out and tortured Brody, while Lana sat in the other room, where the henchman was watching her. Johnny was asking Brody were the falcon was but Brody said “I don’t know of any falcon”.
So Johnny whacked Brody over the head with a crowbar and asked again. Brody answered “I don’t know what it is or what it looks like”. So Johnny whacked him again with the crowbar. While in the other room Lana had gotten the idea of flirting with the henchmen that was watching her. So she talked to him, in just a few minutes he was gazing at her as if he were hypnotized. So she reached into his back pocket and took his gun and went to go help Brody.
When she got to the room she went over to Johnny and hit him and then he got mad. Then Eddie came in and said “what is going on”. Brody stepped forward and Johnny shot him. After that Johnny grabbed Lana and said “give me the falcon or I’ll break her neck”. As a result Lana said to Eddie “don’t give him the falcon”! But Eddie refused her and went to a picture that was hanging up on the wall and he took it off. Behind it was a safe that Eddie opened and in it was the Burmese falcon.
But Eddie didn’t give it to Johnny, instead he threw it to the ground and it was destroyed. Afterward, Eddie took out his gun and shot Johnny. Then Lana dialed the operator and got in touch with the hospital and got an ambulance for Brody. The next day Brody was ok, but only a flesh wound. That day Lana told Eddie that Johnny had killed his brother.
So now Eddie finally knew who had killed his brother and as for the other gangsters, they didn’t care or want the falcon considering Eddie destroyed it for a good purpose.
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