Characters and told colors in:
Police officer: JJ-red
robber: Ricky rock-Indigo
Deputy: Mason-Orange
Friend: Caleb-Violet
Second hand robber:Jamal Hockins-Green
murder: TJ-Blue
Gadget person: AJ-dark blue
person murdered: Bri- darkred
Narator-white
Bri: "No..no! Please! Don't kill me please!
TJ: "Don't worry, It'll only hurt for a second" He grinned evilly and pointed his M-9 Semiautomatic Pistol at the girls head, Knowing he was being watched from behind by camaras.
Bri: "I'm only 17! Please! I haven't yet lived my life. Spare me please!"
TJ:He winked and said to himself "Damn she's a good actor" but said outloud "Stop your whining b***h. I don't want to have to gag you."
Bri: She stared at him, making sure he saw the anger and hatred in her eyes. Then she spoke, her voice cold and filled with hatred in every syllable "I hope. That when they catch your a**. That they kill you slowly, and painfully." Then she spit at his feet and gave his a digusted look.
TJ: "you b***h! " He growled angrily and kickd the girl hard. "Now I'll kill you." He re-postioned his gun at the girl and pulled the trigger.
Narator: After TJ pulled the trigger a flash of blinding, white light appeared everywhere, Shieding TJ and Bri from veiw. TJ had moved himself to a corner and covered his eyes trying to block out the light.
TJ: "Ahh! God. Damn the ******** light" he muttered to himself. He coughed slightly and moved towards the door.
JJ: JJ busted into the room her Russian ...Makarov.....PPK Co2 in hand. "You are under arrest for the murder of the child! " She shouted "We saw it all on the camaras" She sighed softly and continued to look for the murderer "you have the right to remain quiet! Anything you say, can and will be used against you!" she looked around the room
TJ: He saw the officer but he knew she couldn't see him. "I'll tell you what you want to know. Since you can't see me." He said with a smirk on his face.
JJ: "Why'd you kill her man! She was just an innocent kid!" Yelled JJ at the murderer
TJ: He spoke just loud enough for her to hear him, knowing she still couldn't see him. "She deserved it officer. she didn't please me enough" he smirked slightly to himself letting his words sink into the officers' head
JJ: She mouthed words soundlessly "She..Didn't please you enough! " she shouted and looked in the corner behind the door. She narrowed her eyes and Saw the man But didn't want to let him know that she saw him. She acted as though she was still lookin for him. "You son of a b***h. So what if she didn't please you enough! You didn't have to kill her!"
TJ: "oh but I did" He moved slightly closer to the cop, his movements slient. "See, I showed her things, things that were private to me. " He said, his voice smooth and calm "She knew about the killings I plan to make, and the terror i plan to cause." He postioned himself right behind the cop and whispered in her ear "So she had to die ofcourse." He ran his finger down the back of the officers neck
JJ: She didn't know that the murderer had moved till he was right behind her. But she didn't dare move a muscle. When she heard his smooth voice in her ear and felt his finger on her neck, shivers went through her whole body. She finally got the courage to to speak but didn't turn around, instead put one of her hands in her pocket. "Move away from me." she said, her voice surprising calm. "move away now"
TJ: TJ laughed softly in her ear and placed his hands on the cops waist, knowing she was too scared of him to do anything. "But why should I move away?" He asked her. "I know you like the feel on my hands on you. Just the way Bri did." He again laughed softly into her ear
JJ: JJ finally pulled her hand from her pocket. "I warned you b***h." She turned quickly, plunged the needle in her hand in the right side of his neck and injected the liquid into his neck. Then pulled the needle away
TJ: TJ staggered back a few feet after the cop removed the needle from his neck. "b***h" he said quietly as he fell to his knees and then down to the ground. He couldn't speak or move now, but he was alive
Narator: The room became quiet. All that could be heard was JJ's ragged breathing along with TJ quiet one. Other than that, The room was still and quiet.
Aight I'll continued this later. I'm hungry. @.@
 SSJMoney · Fri Aug 12, 2005 @ 03:51pm · 3 Comments |
