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Dreams of a broken soul
dragon's scares # 9
As the old friends break their kiss your young hero has a face cherry red and a very pleased look on it. Then he speaks in a soft and enchanting tone"Its good to see you. I've alway dream of kissing you and now that I have its the sweetest thing ever." he looks down at the floor shyly. Then the young lady moves up to him and grabs his face then speaks in a loving but sad tone "When you left my world came crashing down,I never knew how big part of my heart I gave to you tell you lift me."her eyes filled up with tears. "Since that day I let no one in my heart like you have the mayors son wants me to marrie him but I told him no not as long as you are the son of the man who took my love away from me." She moves in for another kiss but the door swings wide open and there standing in the door way was the mayor and his son. The mayor's son yells out into the room "will you marrie me please I've been asking you for three year please say yes?" but as his eyes focus into the dark room he see our hero and start to back out he pulls his father with him out into the street. Our hero gose from this new sweet face look back to his cool and com face as he walks out into the street. As our hero heads into the main street the young lady and his mother fallow close behind him.
The mayor stared in awe at the site of him then his face turned to fear as the thought that he was back here to kill him for nearly killing him so many years ago as he just looked into our heros focus eyes. Our hero stops in the middle of the street as every one in the town lays their eyes on him. He slowly takes off his cloak and lets it drop to the growned. Now every one can see his long silver hair that reachs his knees, his amber tan skin,his dark blue marble eyes,his scared toned body with a large scare on his chest and face. but as soon as his cloak finished hitting the grownd a loud womens voice comes out of the forest saying "I Finaly found you my love slave to be." Then our hero's face sunk to that face going oh dear god not her look on his face. Our hero spoke in a soft harsh tone "Oh dear god she found me. eek stressed gonk *

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  • User Comments: [6]
    dream_slayer91
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    Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 09:58am


    heart Beautiful, enchanting, and funny too ^_^ god damn how the hell can you write somthing so perfect???? It makes me think I have amature writing skills LMAO heart


    Anatella
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    Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 12:46pm


    heart i love it! blaugh


    Glow Stick Mosh Pit
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    Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 08:08pm


    I like the end of it, "Oh dear god, she found me!" LOL... That was cute. ^^ KEEP WRITING!!!!


    earthy001
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    Fri Jul 08, 2005 @ 11:10pm


    yay! more more!


    tidus_sakura_chi
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    Sun Jul 10, 2005 @ 06:00pm


    haha totally le rad xd


    Yomekia
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    Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 11:05am


    Okay this is some beautiful writing except that you have a few typos.But I can see through the typos to the true beauty of the story.Please finish it. 3nodding redface


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