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Alrial Hero Of Doom


HatakeChiyo
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My Story Part 4
"No, a plant named "excrementitus" very good, does a wonder to a cold" the old man replied.

"Excre.... what? Anyways, ummm, how do i get out of here?" The girl asked them annoyed."

"You don't" said the Little elf man.

"What do you mean you don't, if theres a way in there better be a way out. Or else I'll make sure you all pay dearly for keeping me here."

*ahem, old man clears throat* "Well there is one way, but that requires you to save this world" the old man continued to smoke on his pipe a bit more but with a wide smile enjoying the sight of the girls face turn red with fury.

The girl tapped her foot increasingly hard on the floor. Seeing no way out and being incredibly exhausted she just gave up and agreed to ...........save the world. "So what do I exactly have to save the world from robots, dinosaurs, a huge orgainization of the yakuza, bigfoot." She asked annoyed

"Don't mock child, the unnamed one is a very powerfull man..... and by god im scared of his crow!!" yelled the old man.

"......A crow.........ok. This is lame let me guess an old man and his pet crow, man if I had to save a world Couldn't it have been a little interesting."

"Never mind that you bafoon, we really need you to get started on your mission, we wont send you alone we'll send a man named Vagrant, hes an incredible swordsmen" said the elf man *couph "and a b*****d"he said in a whisper. "you'll like him hehe. Well lets hop to it we have a ways to go to get to his house."

"Walking...............nooooooooooooo im too tired from walking in that bog you call a forest"

*Smack* the old man hit the girl with his cane. " Stop complaining you foul woman, and lets go."

"ow, your supposed to be a preist!!"

"Yeah and your supposed to be a hero but look at you, nothing but an ugly annoying girl."

"I have a name you know, Its Alrial."

"Girl just get your feet movin before I give you another swap on the head"

"I'm going, I'm going"





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Raniik
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 05:03am


xd not bad, a bit of tweaking and itd be very good
on a side note, a Vagrant isnt generally a name, but more of a title, meaning hobo if you feel like being evil, or more generally a wanderer or traveler, lol and hes a b*****d eh? i like him already


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