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My Poems&&Story this is where i post some of my poems and well since im kinda wrting a "book" i might as well put it on here and get some feed back


The Ice Queen Diva
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Love Is Dead. By: Myrna Luna

Our Love
our love is dead
can't you see?
this love is broken between thee.
the flowers died
from blue to black
they weep now our love died.
the trees weep
and thus remains in our memory.
this love died
never there
it was never there in the first place.
my love for you is never more.
as i shed with tears
my heart repairs in joy
Now you can't break what is rest of my heart.
although i will remember our time
also that our love was in despair.
our love is dead
our flame just died
so farewell and
goodbye
.


emo By: Myrna Luna emo





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Goddess Kara
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comment Commented on: Sat May 26, 2007 @ 04:58am
poor mom


comment Commented on: Mon Jun 04, 2007 @ 06:05pm
sadly thats all thats left after something so curel. memories. they always come up when you dont want them. they can make you sad, or make you happy. if you need anything, you know where to find us



MidNite Assailent
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Maes Hughes0
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comment Commented on: Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 01:30am
wow..what a depressing poem~ crying


comment Commented on: Mon Aug 13, 2007 @ 03:09am
Let's go!

With blood shot eyes, I watch you sleeping
The warmth I feel beside me is slowly fading
Would she hear me, if I called her name?
Would she hold me, if she knew my shame?

There's always something different going wrong
The path I walk is in the wrong direction
There's always someone ******** hanging on
Can anybody help me makes things better?

Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home

The moments died, I hear no screaming
The visions left inside me are slowly fading
Would she hear me, if I called her name?
Would she hold me, if she knew my shame?

There's always something different going wrong
The path I walk is in the wrong direction
There's always someone ******** hanging on
Can anybody help me makes things better?

Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home

This battered room I've seen before
The broken bones they heal no more, no more
With my last breath I'm choking
Will this ever end I'm hoping
My world is over one more time

Let's go!

Would she hear me, if I called her name?
Would she hold me, if she knew my shame?

There's always something different going wrong
The path I walk is in the wrong direction
There's always someone ******** hanging on
Can anybody help me makes things better?

Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home

Better!

Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home



Kyoshiro Sada
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