I See You

• Artist: 1Raven224
• Description: Justr something..
• Date: 04/01/2012
• Tags: brokenheartsadlove

I tell you
a secret.
I trust you will understand.
but you didnt
it hurt when you said:
i have to go
when i told you
my secret
i thought youd understand
why?
i thought youd be there for me...
i was wrong.
to think youd understand
anything
~Raven
(writen 4-2-12)

Comments

[Jessie_Bitchez_ii]

Not sure what the title has to do with your poem, but overall it was okay.
You could have used more descriptive word, but I liked how it is clean and simple and easy to follow.