I Think I Know

• Artist: Trinaaah
• Description: I have been feeling rather depressed lately so last night I thought I would put my feelings in a poem and this is what I got. ~
• Date: 07/02/2011
• Tags: think know

I Think I Know


I think I know why my home has become grey
I think I know why my happiness has faded away
I think I know why I’m depressed
I think I know why my heart has paused in my chest
I think I know why this place feels cold and blue
Baby, the reason is because I don’t have you

Six o’clock strikes sunlight golden but no hope is ‘till nine
My only lover isn’t here and so the Sun hardly shines
But if tears were money I wouldn’t have to worry about cash
Save your sorrow for another day, I’ll be out of here in a dash

And it seems like everyone just talks about prices being too high
No one wants to hear me out; because their heads are up in the sky
Baby, I need you to get me out of here, could you take me for a drive?
So I can leave the pain I felt back at home instead of bundling it up inside

They were all too busy for conversation anyways, I was always left alone
But now they kiss the ground I walk on, begging for me to come home
Bribing me with gifts and lies, though I’m no fool to hypnotize
My love, I won’t hesitate to look around and stare in your brown eyes

I cherish you because you bring me the happiness I had lost
And I can heal those scars on your heart if only you let me across
Because when I am sick of feeling worthless you patch me up and hold me together
My heart glows and pumps just for you in my own little world that you will hold forever.

Comments

[Tino x World Boss]

I like this a lot. You made the words flow nicely. I really like the way you put things together. The use of the rhyming was very intelligent. Thats what i want to see in my poems as well.
Next time add bigger words to emphasize your poetry.
But you did very well. Keep writing! Well done :3 4/5

[bubbley_bubble_head]

its really good how you can express you feelings and i hope everything gets better for you =)