The ghost of September's rains

• Artist: Blackening_Stars
• Description: Got inspired to write this poem by rain. :)
• Date: 03/10/2011
• Tags: ghost cold septembers

A girl, dancing in the rain
She is all alone tearing throught the air
Sodden streaks of hair are covering her face
And the dull clatter of raindrops is joining the dance.

She is all alone dancing in the rain
Breathing in damp September's smells
When you pass her by she disappeard deeper in the fog
Tempting you to follow her
One lonely girl, dancing in the rain. . .
The ghost of cold Septmber's smells.

Comments

[Blackening_Stars]

Thanks for telling. smile razz

[Sincerely Metalhead]

You misspelled cold, but over all, a nice little rhyme. 4.

[Blackening_Stars]

Thanks. smile

[Cosmic Thing]

very isolating but not lonely!! very good!