Don't Forget

• Artist: ABluejay
• Description: The homeless
• Date: 12/01/2010
• Tags: dont forget

As the snow begins to fall
My cigarette begins to light
For the winter isn't good for us all
Especially for those at night

We cherish the snow
For it's beautiful display
But people fail to know
that not everyone has a place to stay

These winters will claim lives
With no mercy or regret
The victim chilled like ice
and a life most will forget

So when you look at the snow with delight
Don't forget how the homeless feel
They will shiver with nostalgic fright
One more concern with their meal

Comments

[ClockworkQuill]

The last line "One more concern with their meal" doesn't sound right. Perhaps it would be better as "One more concerned with their meal" or "Once more concerned with their meal."
It's nice to see a poem trying to make a point in addition to expressing something.