Goodbye Friend

• Artist: Adalido Riftscribe
• Description: I just wrote this today (08 November 2010). It's my way of saying goodbye to someone I thought was a friend, to someone I thought truly cared. In the end, though, true colors were revealed and though I was hurt, I now shed no more tears.
• Date: 11/08/2010
• Tags: goodbye friend

One I thought was a friend apparently thinks not the same of me,
So the end is had and it is time to leave.

It's the end of a period of time we had,
I try to thank God and not be sad.

The times were at least mostly good,
Though I feel as if I've had a hood.

It kept me blinded from what was real,
And allowed me to think it was truly real.

So once more I stand before God and lift up to him my prayers,
Because I know about me He truly cares.

Our own choices He allows us to make,
At least the consequences are not fake.

Good, bad, ugly are the choice results,
As we wind our way through the tumult.

I once had a friend who thought not the same of me,
The end is had and it's time to leave.

Good-bye friend.

Comments

[sassiedew]

I love your poem! You did an awesome job on it. Gave you a 5/5

[edamomme]

Most of us have been in the same place, your poem evokes that sadness and has a kind forgiving spirit.

[angelic snow angel]

I love your poem. It really is good but more than that is the fact that I can relate to your poem big time. I thought my friend cared and would talk to me but the true colors were revealed and it hurt. I believed in our friendship. OF course 5/5.

[Serenity Haven GM]

Good poem!