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Never thought that it could happen you see,
but now parents are dead and its the middle of the night
and only one left is me.
Drunk driver, car crash, then lights out...
Theres still my older bro who is
drivin home from his graduation party, but
for all I know he's probably sittin at home.
Now my back is broke and I lost all hope.
Time to join 'em where angels fly,
where everybody goes when they die...
Wake up in a hospital bed,
with white sheets n' walls and I ask
am I dead?
Can't move my arms, can't move my legs.
Doctor walks in the room, guess what he says.
"Son, I'm just so sad. We tried but we couldn'd save ya mom or dad."
I said yes I know that but why can't I move
and why is it so hard to breathe?
Why the fu*k am I hooked up to this machine?
What happened to the man that hit us dead on, head on
driving down the wrong side of the road?
Did he die? Hope so.
He look down to the ground and this is his reply
"Your paralyzed waist down,
and this machine keeps you alive.
As for the driver that hit you
there he is standin by the door...."
I look to the left and blink my eyes to be sure,
but no, theres my brother soaked in blood cryin his eyes out on the floor...
- by Crimson Rebel Ghost |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2010 |
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- Title: Tragic Night
- Artist: Crimson Rebel Ghost
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I'm resubmitting this because nobody even rated it last time xD
As always, please read, rate, and comment!
ps. plz comment. ill even give you 1k ;w; or a lil gift. something. plz? - Date: 11/05/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Surrendering On All - 12/01/2010
- I really like this poem, It's a surprising even on how the person who hit him was his brother. I enjoyed it wink
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- Xxfallen midnight angelxX - 11/05/2010
- Hmm...I like the idea darling. I must say that this poem just doesn't have like a rhythm to it. I think with a little rewording and a meter, this could be pretty beautiful. Please do not feel bad about this poem. I really do believe this is good, I just have been writing poetry for years..so I am just a tad bit of a critical writer. That is all darling.
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