Fading Away

• Artist: Choru
• Description: well..i love writing poetry...but though i'd give writing a song a try...hope you like it!(i feel that this is unfinished...)comment and let me know what you think!also check my profile for my poems!most of my poems aren't on there but i'll be posting them soon!
• Date: 11/01/2010
• Tags: fading away

[verse 1]
The darkness...
it envelopes me
blinds me, binds me,locks me in a cage...a cage of darkness
i can't escape i cant runaway this is something i must do...
but i fear that...
[chorus]
I'm fading away!
into the darkness
I'm fading away!
into nothing
My ties were severed
and i'm fading away
[verse 2]
A light shines into the darkness
a light that saves me
changes me
i won't run,i wont hide
because this what i wanted
[chorus 2]
I was fading away!
into darkness
I was fading away!
into nothing
I've reastablished my ties
and now i've begun to change
what and who i am.

Comments

[kelpandy]

i like it, but i agree with you and simplifications that its kinda short....
id really wanna hear it with the tune and everything though!!

[Simplifications]

I Love it, but you're right. It really isn't finished. It's way too short.