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I am crazy and wild
I sometimes act like a child
Yet when I look into your eyes
It's as if im hipnotized
I used to be in denial
when asked if I liked you
All I could do was smile
But i guess I fell in love
It's like a match made up above
It was foretold like on weather
We were meant to be together
My world comes crashing down
everytime your not around
I may seem a bit demanding
All i need is your understanding
your kissing, your hugging
All i need is your loving
So lets do our best
to surpass any test
May our love grow each day
maybe even 'till we pass away....
- Title: My feelings...
- Artist: i-l3lue-
- Description: Well i finished this a few days ago.....well i write random poems some dont make much sence cause i start one day and finish them another................so heres my first entry in the arenas :P please be nice......
- Date: 09/15/2010
- Tags: feelings
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Comments (3 Comments)
- i-l3lue- - 09/16/2010
- Yay! i fixed it :3
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- i-l3lue- - 09/16/2010
- Ty! xD i knew something was odd.......i just couldnt tell lol but thnx anyways :3 now how to edit it..... D:} lol!
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- Guhua - 09/16/2010
- 5/5 but here's an error you should catch: We where meant to be toghether- you spelled together wrong and where is suppose to be were.
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