Real Tears

• Artist: -l- sadistic panda -l-
• Description: I used my fav quote in this....its not tht good but oh well its all true...comment/rate plz??
• Date: 06/30/2010
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I used to think we were ment to be,
but now you mean nothing to me.

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You broke my heart not once but twice,
you left me out like melting ice.

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So when you see me cry I just want you to know,
real tears fall from the heart and cover the soul


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Comments

[KingBet]

really nice job. The only thing i would suggest reworking is the third paragraph. If you could fix that up... omg you would have a really really nice poem ^.^

[Kalrista]

i write poetry like this too and i have to say what i write isn't matched to this smile

[brkdemeyere]

I really love it verry deep