A Friends Betrayal

• Artist: Sunshine Valkyrie
• Description: I wrote this poem, because I recently was in a fight with a girl I was once friends with, and yet while it feels good to finally be free of her, part of me is sad that she couldn't see reason, couldn't let it go, couldn't mature enough.
• Date: 06/18/2010
• Tags: betrayal sadness formerfriend rude countenance

Hope and exitement abandoned me long before-
Now all I have is the pain, agony, sorrow.
The countenance of former friends, oh, it hurts more~
They could not imagine the suffering I know.

Now all I have is the pain, agony, sorrow.
Yet for better than what I have, I could not wish.
They could not imagine the suffering I know.
I will not forgive them, they were cruel and churlish.

Yet for better than what I have, I could not wish.
As I speak, I hear the betraying raven crow!
I will not forgive them, they were cruel and churlish.
Yet sadness will find me, no matter where I row~

As I speak, I hear the betraying raven crow!
The countenance of former friends, oh, it hurts more~
Yet sadness will find me, no matter where I row~
Hope and exitement abandoned me long before-

Comments

[DeathLies]

Perhaps check some spelling and grammar.
But other wise a fairly good piece of work.