Life Is Only A Game

• Artist: Rinocerotis
• Description: I Wirte Poems And Stuff And This One Just Came To My Head A while ago But I Didn't Knwo How To Word It..It Is A True Statemnt Life Is Only A Game..But People Don't Stop To Relize It.
• Date: 06/05/2010
• Tags: life only game

Life Is Only A Game,
We Are The Players.
The Events In Our Lives
Are The Spaces We Land On
Life Is A Game
Sometimes Its a Happy Moment
And Somtimes It Is A Moment
We All Wont To Forget.
Life Is A Game
You Can Play It
And See If You Win Or Lose
When You Get Upset Over It
Some Seem To Quit And
Other Seem To Keep On Trying
Life Is A Game
Are you Gonna Try To Win?
Or Are You Gonna Quit
When The Game Gets Hard?

- Baby_Pluto <3

Comments

[pearness]

8th line- spelling error- want.
14th line- spelling error-others.
and one grammar issue with the last two lines- if you are going to use slang and contractions, you should keep them consistent- this is the first time you used slang in your poetry and it is at the end. Gonna= going to. overall 3/5