The world as we know it.

• Artist: CarolineMicheal
• Description: our life
• Date: 05/28/2010
• Tags: world know poems

Everytime we look outside all we see is war and violance.
Everytime a child looks out they see one another and who is their friends.
No one really looks out to see the beauty of the world no more.
The butterflys and the birds flying around minding there own and singing there songs.
We have our songs and tvs and other things yes,
But when is last time u just stood outside in the freash air and look up at the clouds and just listen to the songs of nature.
Now times all we see is war and violance we never see the importance things.
Dont be blind in this world. Dont be deaf in this world.
Open your ears and your eyes and see the wonders and hear the songs of nature.

Comments

[Ashley Aes Sedai]

This is a poem. If your knowledge of a poem is just rhythms, then you got no idea what you are talking about.

I like it, it's true too.

[dragonson04]

it's VIOLENCE, spell check can be your friend

[Mrs_Vengeance_A7x]

1. What is the point in writing about how we have our electronics and do not see the beauty of nature if you're using one yourself to wright this message 2. People may listen more if you actually spell the words right and use correct terms instead of "u" 3. This is NOT poetry and this is not meant to be a song so why put it in this section?
The whole idea of you wrighting this is foolish.