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The moon shines down through the night.
I see her there, without a fright.
Her delicate hand twists and twirls,
As I run my finger through her curls.
Her beauty matches no other.
Oh how she sits there, under my cover.
My love for her is more than a simple feeling,
it is my bond, forever sealing.
I try to tell her how much so,
I love her, like a deer loves his doe.
So i watch her, in the moon-lit room,
And i wish to speak of my love to her soon
Sleep tight, my moon.
- by TheXForgottenXShadow |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/22/2010 |
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- Title: The Moon-Lit Beauty
- Artist: TheXForgottenXShadow
- Description: this is a poem i just made. i made it for a girl i really love, and i cant muster the strangth to give it to her, so iam putting it on gaia
- Date: 05/22/2010
- Tags: love moon beauty
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Comments (5 Comments)
- TheXForgottenXShadow - 03/11/2011
- This poem makes me sad. I think i wrote this in 7th grade. Anyway, we did end up going out, and i completely forgot about this poem. But just recently we broke up. It sucked. End?
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- TheXForgottenXShadow - 05/24/2010
- lol, i didnt think it was that great ^_^. ive been taking poetry lessons, but i didnt use any of them in this poem, cept assonance( whene a vowel is reapeated in a line of poetry)
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- etched in dreams - 05/23/2010
- Well, I know if I got a poem like that, I'd be touched. 5 stars :]
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- TheXForgottenXShadow - 05/23/2010
- lol, shes not taken, i know that much.
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- Alli373 - 05/23/2010
- thats really nice dude u should try to give it to her...and if shes tooken....u should save it 4 someone even better than the one u fell in love with <3 5/5
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