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Sometimes we overlook things.
We look out into the distance, longing for something more.
But we have a beautiful sunset right there.
Why must we overlook.?
Why must examine every crook?
Why don't we see what a beautiful world we have?
I do and if you do you will put this on your profile.
- by operation doomsday |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/02/2010 |
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- Title: Sometimes
- Artist: operation doomsday
- Description: A poem I wrote.
- Date: 05/02/2010
- Tags: sometimes
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sukaza Cervidae - 04/12/2012
- With the "put this on your profile" ending...it brought it down. Honestly, with an ending like that, you may as well have added "Copy/paste this to 10 profiles then press F10, log out and back in, and check to see you now have 3,000,000g!"
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- operation doomsday - 05/08/2010
- Its not supposed to be pushy and it wasn't. It was for people who don't overlook and are disappointed in the people that do. So whatever.
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- panda godess - 05/08/2010
- It was good until the "if you think so put this on your profile" that was pushy 3/5
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- iWeirdOso - 05/02/2010
- yeah why do we over look ?
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