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I cry
I cry harder
I cry harder in the dark
I cry harder in the dark knowing no one cares
I cry harder in the dark knowing no one cares because I am not worth it
I cry harder in the dark knowing no one cares because I am not worth it, I never really was
I cut
I cut deeper
I cut deeper into myself
I cut deeper into myself knowing it fails to bring death
I cut deeper into myself knowing it fails to bring death because it is all I know how to do
I cut deeper into myself knowing it fails to bring death because it is all I know how to do, that’s all I was ever taught
I feel
I feel worse
I feel worse for being me
I feel worse for being me, a failure
I feel worse for being me, a failure at everything everyone else masters naturally
I feel worse for being me, a failure at everything everyone else masters naturally without even struggling
I bleed
I bleed more
I bleed more all over the floor
I bleed more all over the floor creating puddles of bloody tears
I bleed more all over the floor creating puddles of bloody tears, leaving stains on white carpet
I die
I die sadly
I die sadly in March
I die sadly in March near the end
I die sadly in March near the end with only a few souls as witness
I die sadly in March near the end with only a few souls as witness, the tree and the rope in which killed.
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- | Submitted on 03/30/2010 |
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- Title: Death in March
- Artist: no longer in this account
- Description: As in metaphores, this tells the end of March within a character's point of veiw who wishes to disappear completely. It is pretty random, rate please and PLEASE leave comments on any mistake or any advice good or bad. All comments are welcomed!
- Date: 03/30/2010
- Tags: death march
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Comments (5 Comments)
- X-Shinu-Chan-X - 10/04/2010
- Sad and beautiful at the same time. Its great 5/5.
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- Skye_Fuller - 07/19/2010
- i really like the repetition (idk if i spelt that rite) very good 5/5
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- no longer in this account - 04/04/2010
- It's the style of poem, it is supposed to repeat every line in every stanza...
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- La Petite Mofette - 04/03/2010
- I see where your tying to go with the repetition but there's just a bit too much. You could still have repetition in every line if you try cutting some pieces. It's decent though.
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- Metaphoric Rain - 03/30/2010
- Oh, it's beautiful...
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