Broken

• Artist: Thisblondierules
• Description: ok umm well the inspiration came from well alot of things. Hopefully anyone that reads it understands it and comment plz!
• Date: 03/09/2010
• Tags: broken

This girl is so lost, so alone.
She was rejected, shunned by force.
They just laughed, no regret.
They are the cruel people.

This girl is so teary.
Pushed away by a friend.
She doesn't seek revenge,
But blames herself fully.

This girl is so sad.
So turns to a method.
To keep her mind busy.
A hobby to make her happier.

This girl is so focused.
She works on her art.
Hard stroks slowly appear.
Pink and deep red shows beautifully.

This girl is so down.
The world is depressing in her eyes.
She has no one to talk to.
This is a first for her.

This girl is so fragile.
She wears hoodies everyday.
Bored hair curling causes a cringe.
Memories and tears haunt her.

This girl is so broken.

Comments

[Thisblondierules]

i like it alot. the comedic twist is a amazing touch hehe
thx for commenting by poem really creative and interesting to read. : D

[Death_0f_Death]

who is this girl whom has experiences she has had are simlilar to those of mine of the past for i was brokin once to but i start anew and pieced myself together once more with the aid off super glue (lol)and and if she will allow it ill sit down and be some 1 to talk with new freind ship i always welcome for my heart has no limit for freinds to put within it . and you poem was so lovely (good) i thought hey ill coment with 1 but not as good as yours smile