I love you

• Artist: love the pixie
• Description: just a poem i was sad and bored so yeah hope you like it ^_^
• Date: 02/12/2010
• Tags: love

I love you
my hart feels like it is broken with everything going on I can’t take it I can’t even stop crying to pick up the pieces of my hart and my life I can’t see why I still like you after all the pain you put me though but I can still only say I love you

Comments

[Eretico]

I can clearly see the emotional value of love in the writing,so kudos for that.However,it sorta seems more like a lovestruck rant or ramble rather than a poem,possessing no rhyme or poetic rhythm.Might want to develop it into something more eloquent and poetic than it currently is.Good concept overall,though.