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A roses petals that fall to the ground.
Eyes who spill blood instead of tears.
A heart whos ache is never gone.
Who is this?
Who am I?
Why do I feel this way?
I feel lost and alone.
I feel like crying all the time.
Why?
Why is it I feel this way?
My heart is gone,
My mind is numb,
I can't understand.
Why do I feel like this?
What is this emotion that grips me?
Eyes who cry blood instead of tears,
A soul who cannot be found
A saddness that cannot end.
Roses are black.
Violets are dead.
Feelings run a muk
While I lose my way and dissapear
Along the winding path
It dosent end
Will anyone find me?
Guild me back?
Or,
Will I never be found?
Will I wander forever?
Thats fine
After all
I can't understand
What I feel,
After all.
- Title: Confused
- Artist: Spizzey
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- Date: 12/31/2009
- Tags: confused
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Comments (4 Comments)
- kate0707 - 01/09/2010
- its really good... smile
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- mirachan3 - 01/02/2010
- hey, nice poem. I liked it. I just find that it could have more structure but it was very deep and kind of mirrors what i feel right now. The title was great it captures the poems essence. 4/5
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- Silently_Die_By_You - 12/31/2009
- ehh could use improving 4/5
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- JennXyliar - 12/31/2009
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AMAZING!!!! *0* that's deep i really like this poem X)
awesome poem - Report As Spam