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Revisited, reread.
The things you said,
All floating in my head.
I cross my legs
I close my eyes
I try to let these feelings die...
The pain and
the tears
all confirm my greatest fears
I repulse you, so I hear.
I wish I could say I deserved better
And write it all down in a letter-
confirming a mutual detestate.
All I really want is a date.
A love, a hate.
A me and a you.
And my feelings all ripped in two.
- by OtioseOtaku |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/02/2009 |
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- Title: For you, who broke my heart
- Artist: OtioseOtaku
- Description: My first poem. About my unrequited love, which completely sucks. Hope it doesn't suck too much! :emo:
- Date: 12/02/2009
- Tags: love hate poem hurt
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Comments (2 Comments)
- x-DopeSwaqqa - 12/06/2009
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I know how you feel on this poem you wrote!!! sad
You did written this very will!!
I like it very well done!
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- ixhatexlifex - 12/05/2009
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Oh, I know how you feel on this one sad
Very well-written, actually.
I like it! smile - Report As Spam