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The girl has so many problems.
No one seems to care.
The girl is so lonely,
She needs some comfort.
A hand reaches out to her,
Not just one, but two.
They both are holding hands,
Reaching out for hers.
"The two of the seem so happy"
She thinks to herself.
"I wonder if they'd accept me"
She takes their hands, and walks away with them,
But little does anyone know,
It would be the death of her.
Every night at dinner,
She eats and eats and eats,
But when mom and dad are gone,
The bathroom toliet is her best friend.
The mom and dad notice,
"She's getting alittle thinner, Don't you think dear?"
The mom asks the dad.
"i believe your right my sweetheart."
The dad says in response.
Little do they know,
They wont have their little girl for long.
Day by day she gets smaller,
Along with her appetite and stomach.
Her clothes seem to get baggier and baggier each monent.
She cant see the harm she's inficting upon herself.
She thinks that Ana and Mia are her best friends ever.
She thinks that they are her saviors.
From the tragic world who claims she not worth anything at all.
"She's too young to know about that dear..."
The mother tries to reassure herself and her husband,
That their daughter is just fine,
And that she's just getting thinner cause she's just that way.
Little do they know,
They wont see her ever again..
Cause that night,
She had grown so thin,
Her heart just gave out,
She died in the sleep that night.
The mom and the dad,
Were so sad,
They had no idea about her problems,
With Ana and Mia until it was too late.
They now knew that they would never see,
Their little girl again.
- by Daddy Got This Account |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/14/2009 |
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- Title: Little Girl, Big Problems.
- Artist: Daddy Got This Account
- Description: about a 13 year old girl struggling with anorexia and bulimia. (ana and mia) the parents had no clue about either until it was too late. hope you enjoy the poem. please rate and comment. (this is inspired by my own problems, so dont tell me to not write and post this stuff because i dont know what they feel like. cause i do.)
- Date: 11/14/2009
- Tags: little girl prolems
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Expired Pudding - 02/06/2010
- awwwww.....sad truths + awesome writer= amazing and sad poem.
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- transiti0n - 12/29/2009
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aww thats so... just so deep ): it made me feel a little sad inside. because its true no one cares about a lonely girl and wont ask whats wrong ):
5/5 that was just great . - Report As Spam
- Daddy Got This Account - 12/23/2009
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@Amayachi
THANK YOU!!!!!!!
:hugs:
someone finally understands!
so thank you. X3 - Report As Spam
- Amayachi_Mika_Sayomi - 12/21/2009
- @Thomlina, Can you be MORE of a jerk? "That's cool"? I hate people who comment and rate just to get gold, you're such assholes, did you even consider what this girl has been through to write such a deep, feeling poem? Did you even read it? I give her 5/5, because I FEEL HER POEM.
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- 290DarkStars - 11/17/2009
- wow... It makes me feel guilty to read it. Its so sad and, well, honest. I bet this happens every day. I must say that its really REALLY good (You considerd entering to win something big, like a car, or something?) 5/5... you deserve an award Luna, Your exellent.
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- thomlina - 11/14/2009
- thats cool 5/5
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