The Dead Opening

• Artist: naruhinawuv2
• Description: A poem from a book that I am writing called The Dead Opening....
  Please Rate IT!!!!!!!
• Date: 10/09/2009
• Tags: dead opening

Here we go into the Dead Opening,
a land most full of the moping,

The Underworld is where we are,
that we might go so so far.

That we will go through the door,
now it is forever more.

We won't get out at this rate,
so that we can keep our fate,

The end of our lives our near,
so let's just lose the fear.

Comments

[westernsnog]

Ummm...in my opinion(which doesnt really matter)...I think you need to add more detial...like "we will go through the gruesome door"...I dunno...a little more detial would be really nice though smile