Because Of Me

• Artist: xXRukuXx
• Description: A song that i created
  when i was bored well i hope you like it! :D
• Date: 09/17/2009
• Tags: create song drama love

I was standing by you,
looking at the blurry window,
I couldn't see a thing,but I knew you
were there.

Chorus:
So you decided to take my heart
away from you.It's all because of me yeah
I didn't want to do it oh oh oh it was
hard for you and me to take a
life hold it on oh oh yeah yeah!

Paragraph 2=
It depends on your whole life
if im ready for this,but I can't take
anymore of this! So you have to
move on.

(Repeat Chorus)

Paragraph 3 =
Now the days got worser
and everyone is looking at
me! what have you done to me
are you trying to ruined me! yeah!!

Repeat Chorus)

So this thing was because of me oh oh oh oh...yeah.

Comments

[Sleep is Wrong]

The grammar mistakes make me want to beat my head in, and the fact you have the parts labled annoy me to no end. I have a feeling if I heard this song, it'd kill me even more. So generic, like it's been written and heard a thousand times: reproduced and spit out. Bleh. 1/5.

[Genjo Riisa]

Um... there are some terrible grammar mistakes. The days get "worse", not "worser". But I can definetly imagine a gruff man voice singing this. It's kind of generic though... but not a bad job.