So this is love

• Artist: kitty_vt
• Description: This is the first poem I ever wrote.
• Date: 09/12/2009
• Tags: love

Loving
Laughing
Feeling
Crying

Making
Breaking
Fearing
Dying

What is made with lovers flying
Concrete wings and careful crying
Perfect feathers are so binding
Stars above yet still so blinding

Lovers always fear the falling
Knowing not just what they’re stalling

Life is like the stone hard wings
Like crumpled notes and covered things
Always fearing future stings
Loving what perfection brings

Comments

[trickyb8]

kitty - not bad for ur first stint! i enjoyed the reading, but felt like it was missing something, like it needed to be hardier, beefier. still, i enjoyed it, and i can't wait 'til u get some polish, kiddo! keep 'em coming!

[AnimeYaoiFan]

i like this is so cool