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My Last Breath
Fujiko1
Written On: 9/6/09
As I take my last breath
I realize, to my surprise
That all the people around me
See no compromise
My eyes flutter closed
My breathing comes to a halt
My heart stops beating
And I realize it's all my fault
The accident, the crash
The people all around
Dazed and confused
I'm bleeding on the ground
I never saw it coming
I shouldn't have been drinking
The pole came out of nowhere
I wish that I'd been thinking
Crash and boom
I'm lost inside my head
Consciousness is lost
As I lay in a hospital bed
Pain is all over
I cannot seem to cry
My eyes are looking up
Deep into the dark sky
I wish upon the stars
And pray to God to save
The family that I have
God, help them be brave
And as I slip away
I hold my mother's hand
I never got to live my life
I'm on my last grain of sand
I slip into the peaceful realms
And face the Almighty One
All my sins cast at His feet
A new life has begun
Don't miss me, Mom
This is not goodbye
Please don't forget me, Mom
I'll meet you in the sky (soon)
- Title: My Last Breath
- Artist: Polly Odd
- Description: This was written when I was told a story of someone who was drinking and hit a pole. He's friend of mine, and he's not doing so well. This was, also, written because someone asked me, "What would you say if you lay dying on a hospital bed with all your family friends around you and you only had a short time to live?" What would YOU say?
- Date: 09/06/2009
- Tags: last breath
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- Silvar_sigrund - 09/09/2009
- good-bye and let me die in peace near those i care most about
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