it's as if I died

• Artist: Apriciti
• Description: ...
• Date: 07/24/2009
• Tags: died

i feel oh so uninspired,
i hate this feeling
im so tired
i feel dead, so un-alive.
though my heart's still pumping
its as if i

OOOOOOOOO{died}. . . . . .

Comments

[vv7722]

I agree with the comment below mine. Short but cool. Great job. 4/5

[Brok3n_H3art33]

Short but right down to the point. i like it but it would've been better if it was longer. 4/5