Your blood

• Artist: iBunior
• Description: Well, its true, i have some weird obsession with wanting to kill people~ Nyan!
  And this wasnt meant to go to anyone.
• Date: 07/18/2009
• Tags: your blood

I want, to Kill you.
I want to stab you in your heart,
And watch you bleed under me.
I want to see the expression on your face as i betray you.
I want your blood on my hands.
The deep red liquid flowing out of you.
Its everywhere and it makes me so happy.
I want to watch you struggle beneath me,
As i let you die so slow.
And then ill tell you i love you,
And then ill stab you once more.
Now your screaming in pain,
Your begging me to let you go.
But all i can here is you wanting more.
I laugh quietly as i hear you groan.
And this may be the best moment ever.
Watching your deep red blood dirty my already filthy hands.
I need, to Kill you.

Comments

[fruit4you]

I understand the emotion, but the writing style is very bland. You have almost no structure, flow, or rhythm. You could make it sound more sadistic by being more subtle about killing. I mean, sociopath killers usually are charismatic people until they are caught.

[Deadlylight6]

oh how blood is delicious, dripping down into ur throat. the metallic taste of iron! i have quite the many ppl i want to kill too. but so far the blood i tasted is from my own adn a friends from our wounds.

[Pwnage432]

wow,,,bloody man,bloody. wow....nice description

[Suicidal-RagDoll]

pretty good nd gorey
i love gorey