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I know life can be
difficult but there is a
way to make it good
If you want life to
be better for you then love
has to be there, too
Love in your life will
bring bliss to you and you can
be happy once more
But if you can't fit
love into your life then you
can not be happy
- Title: Life
- Artist: meree
- Description: haikus about life
- Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: haiku about life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- mecha_may_dia - 10/19/2010
- good work, and here's a little-known fact: the plural form of the word "haiku" is "haiku", not "haikus". even most teachers don't know that. it's surprising.
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- ThrashMetal_14 - 07/16/2009
- im glad that you write about what you believe in.I liked it.Love is common in poetry,but everyone write about how they feel. :] *four stars
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- Razzz25 - 07/16/2009
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I like it.
You've got a very interesting style, not to mention the concept.
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